I've been pondering how to depict the final outcome. All my skills and agility felt weighed down; every word was an arduous task but filled with deep intent. It felt like a heavy burdened trek, yet there was an indomitable drive within me, pushing forward regardless of any obstacles.,So, I made a few small tweaks to polish up the ending; these changes may not be significant in the grand scheme of things, but they should make for a more satisfying conclusion.,In my mind’s eye is always a scene – an evening twilight at the school music building during perhaps my tumultuous final year of high school. On the top floor of the music building, in one of the practice rooms, a girl plays her violin against the backdrop of the setting sun; she creates beautiful melodies that encapsulate all joys and sorrows alike. I hope you could hear this music.。